I‘m here in darkness,
and despair.
How do I get out of here?
I hear voices,
everywhere,
taunting,
haunting,
torturing me.
I see people,
they’re e v e r y w h e r e.
Some are dying,
cry i n g,
hurt ing,
plead ing
help,
help us p l e a s e?
These four walls
are
crumbling
crashing
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
down
Who’ll come rescue me?
Rescue me
from agony?
I’m lonely,
in solitude
who’ll come
and
whisper my name?
Who fight the enemy?
Wait,I can see
glimmers of light,
but, darkness
overshadows me.
I can see
glimmers of hope,
but, hope
seems far
will I ever get
out of here?
I see light,
hope’s here too,
hope assures
if I can see
beyond darkness,
despair,
LIGHT is here
to show the way
then,
I’ll be free
from
captivity
Yes. Follow the light.
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Yes, the Light will set us free. Thanks for visiting Jacqueline, I’m sure you could be resting from hosting that amazing Valentine weekend bash.
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It’s been hectic!
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Yes, but your mission was successfully accomplished, well done
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Indeed it was. I am happy you came 🙂
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Sounds horrible. Yes, here’s to hope. Great poem. Made me anxious just reading it.
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Sadly, this is an every day reality of some. For them, their dark world always seek Light, sometimes light does not seem near…. Thanks Pamela for taking time to read and respond. I’m happy to hear my write accomplish that effectiveness intended.
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I absolutely LOVE the visual formatting to add drama to the text!!! Intense, provocative, emtional, with a visual and verbal drama, gripping me…
And then the resolution… wow!!
I feel like I just lived through the tale of Pandora’s Box!
Bravo! BRAVO! *standing and applauding sincerely* 🙂
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Ah thanks, you have me with a big smile, primarily because I wanted to bring drama to the seriousness of this piece and keep interest in what this piece is saying. Thanks for sharing your generous observation.
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Love this!
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Thanks Khaya for reading and visiting
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Great formatting in this post, Yvonne. Makes it three times more powerful.
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Thanks CM:) Appreciate the read
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That’s what Keeps us going – that Light, that Hope!
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You are right Oluseye, the Light in dark places.
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